Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
Happiness is a matter of choice and money, certainly, cannot be directly related toit.If people feel that the greater the amount of money they receive, the greater will be the happiness, will be a wrong perception. There are various factors other than money which can make people happy. This essay will shed light upon why people struggle to define happiness and what are the different ways to be happy.
Happiness is a subjective feeling which may be difficult to put in words. It is something that one experience and depends upon the needs of the persons. For example, a child feels happy when he is given a toy for displaying a desired behavior. Similarly, a professional will feel happy when he has been rewarded or promoted. Happiness lies in fulfilling the needs of an individual and will vary from person to person. A child may appreciate a candy but it will have no utility for an adult. Hence, people have difficulties in explaining what makes them happy.
There are various means by which people can be happy. One such way is job satisfaction. For example, if employees feel engaged in their jobs, feel committed to the organization in which they work and displays organization citizenship behavior, then they derive happiness out of it. Another factor that leads to happiness is love and affection towards one’s family. There are people who tend to find happiness within their families and friends. For example, spending time with children and taking them out on weekend gives a mental peace that leads to happiness. Yet another example could be people who are the lover of mankind. These philanthropists dedicate their lives to the society with an aim of giving it back what all they have taken from the environment. For example, a lawyer may start doing pro-bono work to the needy. Hence, they feel contended and happy.
To conclude, happiness is a feeling and hence it is difficult to describe and define. There are ways through which happiness can be achieved but it all depends upon the needs of the persons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...tainly, cannot be directly related toit.If people feel that the greater the amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, similarly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8901734104 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6327116129 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6870216598 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36410574541 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108144678211 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917175610899 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256883535653 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080354102572 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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