A friend of yours is living in another country. You would like to work in his/her country for a while. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Explain why you would like to work in his/her country – get offer from ıbm , and d like to have international experience and give chance to improve language
– Describe your skills and experience – expert at Microsoft and had been team leader
– Ask for some information about working in his/her country – ne gereklı calısmam için, özel izin
Dear Kevin,
Hope you are very well and this letter find you great. I am really sorry not to write to you for a long time.
I am writing this letter to let you know some new news regarding my next job and to get a little bit information about your country where you live.
As I said before , I was working in routine job in which there were no opportunity to improve my skills and no future.
However, surprisingly ,I got offer from the IBM Software Company in your country for Management Training that will be more useful for my future career.
I strongly believe that it would be more beneficial for me to acquire international experience . On the other hand, it will give me chance to improve my language skills and to be fluent in Spanish.
As I have worked in IT sector for a long time , I am expert at Microsoft Office programmes , SQL server and am intermediate level Java ones.
In addition to these skills I had worked for a while as a team leader in some Projects in my previous job. I can, therefore manage a group and organization properly.
Is there anything that I should know related to working process in Spain? According to the latest laws , I will need to employee visa and permanent accommodation place right ?
İf you give more information about that I would be happy .
See you soon.
All the best .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...news regarding my next job and to get a little bit information about your country where y...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ittle bit information about your country where you live. As I said before , I w...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ntry where you live. As I said before , I was working in routine job in which t...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity to improve my skills and no future. However, surprisingly ,I got offer from ...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and no future. However, surprisingly ,I got offer from the IBM Software Compan...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... got offer from the IBM Software Company in your country for Management Training...
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Line 6, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he IBM Software Company in your country for Management Training that will be mor...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r me to acquire international experience . On the other hand, it will give me chan...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...have worked in IT sector for a long time , I am expert at Microsoft Office program...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...am expert at Microsoft Office programmes , SQL server and am intermediate level ...
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Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...osoft Office programmes , SQL server and am intermediate level Java ones. In ...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rammes , SQL server and am intermediate level Java ones. In addition to these...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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..., SQL server and am intermediate level Java ones. In addition to these skills...
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Line 10, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...In addition to these skills I had worked for a while as a team leader in some Pro...
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Line 12, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s in Spain? According to the latest laws , I will need to employee visa and perma...
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Line 12, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he latest laws , I will need to employee visa and permanent accommodation place r...
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Line 12, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “İf” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d permanent accommodation place right ? İf you give more information about that I ...
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Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... information about that I would be happy . See you soon. All the best .
^^
Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...appy . See you soon. All the best .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54771784232 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59634128122 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4952807837 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0666666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239213133973 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704254518676 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567032625594 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927897299255 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054615013056 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.