A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university He She has asked for your advice studying this subject Write a letter to your friend In your letter give details of the course you took at the university explain w

Dear Jayraj,
Hope you are doing well. I am really happy that you are planning to study Genetics at Sardar Patel University, and I would really like to help you to get through the process of application.

As I have told you before, S.P university is the only university in Gujarat providing Genetics as majors, so it's really kind of a unique subject to study. This course offers wide range of opportunity to study Plants, Animals and Humans. During your 1st and 2nd year you'll be able to study both the animal and plant kingdom, whereas in your 3rd year its all about Human developmental genetics, which is really interesting.

I will definitely advise you to join this university as the practical knowledge that they provide to the students is at par. The colleges have all the latest instruments and devices to work with. Other than that the professors are really friendly and are always ready to help whenever you need them.

So if you are ready to apply, you just need to follow simple steps. You can download the application form from the university website, fill it and submit the form along with yours 10th and 12th marksheet at the university office. As the admissions are given on first come first basis, don't delay your application and apply soon.

Hope I have provided you with enough information, if you need any other sort of information or any assistant during your application procedure, you know where to contact me.

See you soon.
Sarah

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: P
...cation. As I have told you before, S.P university is the only university in Gu...
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Suggestion: kind of
...iding Genetics as majors, so its really kind of a unique subject to study. This course of...
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Suggestion: you'll
...nd Humans. During your 1st and 2nd year youll be able to study both the animal and pl...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...plant kingdom, whereas in your 3rd year its all about Human developmental genetics,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, well, whereas, kind of, sort of, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55580592324 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7475847059 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312531678913 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100968055743 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448739075583 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163445893634 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422052642135 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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