People in most of the countries are investing a lot of time at their workplace. This is mainly due to the work load for some and for others to show their dedication level. I believe, making an extra effort in order to achieve a position in a company at the cost of giving up a social life has more negative impact.
One of the major reason for spending more time at job is work load, as a company do not hire enough man power required to do a particular job, a single employee is over burdened with the work that needs to be completed in a given timeframe. So, in order to achieve that, employees need to work overtime. For instance, a research conducted by Economic times stated that majority of employees works for 55-60 hours instead of 40 hour work shift. Also, health problem is of major concern when an individual is working more than thier ideal time.
Although dedicating more time to a company limits social gathering for some, other takes it as an opportunity to prove their capability. For example, an employee hired at the lowest position tends to give enough time to the company just to prove their loyalty, and in return they expect to get promoted quickly. This is commonly seen with people joined as a fresher. Also, money is one of the crucial factor in everyone's life, but earning it by sacrificing the other important things like family time is not worth it.
In conclusion, working overtime may benefit an individual financially, however it makes a person to be less available to do any social activities with friends and family. In order to overcome this situation, companies should hire enough man power and stop over burdening their employees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'shift' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'shifts'.
Suggestion: shifts
...for 55-60 hours instead of 40 hour work shift. Also, health problem is of major conce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70068027211 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54749870291 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5533900106 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17512483723 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694383275255 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494446535677 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11384829968 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582468656397 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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