A friends of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter :
Give details of the course you took at the university :
Explain why you recommend the university :
Give some advice about how to apply :
Dear Joon
I am so glad to learn that you have finally decided to complete your Master’s degree in History at the University of Social Science and Humanities. I think that you are also going to enjoy your time, just as I did, at Vietnam’s one of the best universities for studying History.
But, before anything else, let me share some details about the course so that you can fully prepare yourself for the challenges of studying History at this university. The programme is structured to last for 24 months, and during this time, you are required to complete about 45-50 credit hours. Please apply before March/ April if you really want to get all the classed at your preferred schedule. Just to inform you, out of these 45-50 credit hours, approximately 32 hours will be the core subject.
Please also expect to do some extensive research works, which sometimes can be really challenging, at the laboratory in order to gain some valuable practical experience. But don’t worry about it since the faculty members are very helpful and friendly. I feel great about completing the course from this university and I am quite positive that you will also feel the same.
All you need to do is visit the website, which is www.khoalichsu.ussh.vnu.edu.vn, and it will guide you all the way about how to apply. In case, you do not understand anything, just let me know.
Wishing you all the best. Take care
Warm wishes,
Minh.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82113821138 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99207979115 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3056477954 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2307692308 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346321329129 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112793063101 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847960971161 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174122771542 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103575617808 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.