GENERAL TRAINING WRITING TASK 1You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-Explain why you want to take time off work-Give details of the amount

Dear Mr. Smith,

I work as a Technical Consultant in your company. I am writing to ask if you could allow me a leave for 5 days.

My father has been suffering from some critical health issues from the past few months and yesterday only, he got diagnosed from a major heart problem. I have to take him to hospital for proper checkups and treatment. Also, I won't be able to concentrate on work in such circumstances.

He will be admitted on 21st of August and most probably by 26th of August,Saturday, he will be discharged. I will rejoin from 28th of August. Therefore, it is a matter of 5 days for which I would not be present.

I ensure completing the important assignments in prior. In addition, I have asked Mr. Asley, Senior Technical consultant, to look after my work, to which he agreed. It is my word to you, that the no work will suffer in my absence. I genuinely request you to please approve my leave.

I am looking forward to hearing a positive reply from you.

Thanking you,
Yours Sincerely,
Nupur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sitive reply from you. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Nupur
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...Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Nupur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58918918919 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81239040855 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654054054054 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7043252537 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6428571429 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181576378372 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670520038466 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592488864299 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989706848087 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845294789407 0.0580467560999 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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