Give details of the job position you are applying for Explain why the reference is important Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear

Essay topics:

Give details of the job & position you are applying for
Explain why the reference is important
Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to request you for your assistance that would enable me to apply for a job opportunity.

I have been searching for an accountant profile in a leading financial organization for more than seven months. Fortunately, I have found a vacancy which is for senior accountant designation in KPMG company, located in Gurgaon, Haryana.

Furthermore, the firm needs a reference letter from a lecturer of the last graduated institution. The venture would assess my discipline and dedication basis it; therefore, a letter from your end would be crucial for the consideraion of my application because it has a higher weightage in the shortlisting process.

Moreover, a letter elucidating my determination and hardwork would be adequate to apprise them about my disposition. Besides, the projects and assignments I accomplished in college, would aid in analyzing my acquaintance with various terms and fields. Hence, I request you to kindly assist on this matter as it would be propitious in obtaining my desired job.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Chirag Bhardwaj

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, look, moreover, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37430167598 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20754081696 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4612216107 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180973390128 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731202505005 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701819246864 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102787139653 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822077689424 0.0580467560999 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.