The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Daniel2016 on Thu, 07/28/2016 - 20:43

The given line graph depicts data on the changes in the amounts of CO2 a person emitted on average in 4 countries (the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) between 1967 and 2007.

According to the line graph, in the United Kingdom the CO2 emissions reached a plateau at about 11 metric tonnes from 1967 until 1977. Subsequently, the figure showed a downward trend and eventually touched the lowest point at just under 9 metric tonnes in 2007. As regards Sweden, the figure for average CO2 emissions per person increased between 1967 and 1977, when it peaked at just over 10 metric tonnes. Then it steeply decreased until 1987, followed by a gradul decline until 2007.

With regard to the remaining countries, they showed different patterns from the aforementioned ones. In 1967, in Italy the CO2 emissions were just above 4 metric tonnes, whereas in Portugal the amounts were lower, at roughly 1.2 metric tonnes. The figures for both countries rose progressively over the following period. From 1997 the amounts of CO2 emitted in Italy levelled off at just below 8 metric tonnes, while the ones emitted in Portugal still increased slightly, touching the highest point at approximately 5 metric tonnes in 2007.

Overall, it is clear that the United Kingdom produced the largest amounts of gas throughout the period in question, as opposed to Portugal, where a person emitted on average the least amounts of CO2.

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Average: 8.4 (128 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'as regards', 'with regard to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25855513308 0.220444632235 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.0950570342205 0.167888034529 57% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0760456273764 0.0606518309736 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456273764259 0.0506257000042 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0152091254753 0.118615021944 13% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.182509505703 0.107062808482 170% => OK
Participles: 0.0380228136882 0.041066498444 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53636690554 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114068441065 0.0385302599488 30% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00380228136882 0.00132118243153 288% => OK
Determiners: 0.110266159696 0.0714148451538 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0191574576366 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00760456273764 0.00930345855455 82% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1421.0 1141.60824742 124% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.134020619 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99578059072 5.53046319177 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409282700422 0.284621296913 144% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295358649789 0.211203875043 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139240506329 0.133321485273 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0928270042194 0.0843313296314 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53636690554 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527426160338 0.622163163488 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.420394943 62.8969750728 79% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7 16.4300151701 144% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1996753235 44.7399317507 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 90.9928171075 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 16.4300151701 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.613754768223 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 53.2358649789 37.5504026743 142% => OK
Elegance: 3.07317073171 1.13073093955 272% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474080175892 0.331212695627 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131578498914 0.0927372745006 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108611850647 0.0736520305886 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657051401262 0.579516596996 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.228864014587 0.180689518051 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237156659752 0.122183219658 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11884270858 0.0765303033291 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.413175582902 0.211926503985 195% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0543279033391 0.0737400523855 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360911537267 0.203819188451 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10149250935 0.067151250289 151% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 8.32989690722 60% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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