Dear Sir,
My name is Kumar S Sampad and I am a resident of Danforth Area in Toronto. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement published in The Daily Star regarding the requirements of volunteers in Charity works for the people on the street suffering due to heavy ice storms in the last couple of days. I am interested to help those victims and owing to this, I would like to give a short brief about my past records.
I have graduated in social science and involved in lots of non-governmental activities for the last 10 years. In fact, these kinds of activities give me an immense mental pleasure in many ways. In fact, as a human, it is our responsibility to help mankind in need. In lieu of this, last year, I have served myself for the flood-affected people in the Ottawa Area to ensure the basic supply of food and other staffs. I helped the Red Cross team to navigate properly in that area and fostered the delivery process. I think, this time my experience will be good enough to serve the community as well from the humanitarian ground.
For this charity event, I can raise fund from the local people and a bulk amount of winter clothing can be managed shortly. Moreover, the used winter jackets and boots, as well as gloves, can be collected from nearby regions. Additionally, I can assist to distribute those materials with my personal vehicle. I know, different social organizations are coming up with their wholehearted efforts, but I cannot wait to help the people in my ways too.
I look forward to hearing back to you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar S Sampad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a short brief about my past records. I have graduated in social science and in...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...responsibility to help mankind in need. In lieu of this, last year, I have served ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, i think, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 287.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66550522648 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78861909551 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.415012477 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128090885455 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366331073187 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319252907191 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074501211658 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241690054181 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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