IELTS writing sample: The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in relation to a job position entitled librarians assistant which advertised in the college board. After reading your criteria, I am confident that I am suitable person for this position.
I am one of the students who is studying computer software in third term in engineering college. Regarding my experience, I would say I have not worked in the library before that. However, I am specialist in programming, searching relevant articles in valuable browsers. Therefore, I can assist students to find appropriate articles for their project. Furthermore, I am able to program a new software for collecting and arranging data.
Anyway, I would like to achieve this part time job as for two main reasons. Firstly, because of some financial issues, I need to find a job to afford my extents. Secondly, I can perform my project in the library in the time I am free.
I hope you find me a dedicated person for this position.
I am looking forward to hearing you soon.
Best regards
Elham Mousavi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in relation to a job positi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...arians assistant which advertised in the college board. After reading your criter...
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Suggestion: part-time
.... Anyway, I would like to achieve this part time job as for two main reasons. Firstly, b...
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...tly, because of some financial issues, I need to find a job to afford my extents...
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... financial issues, I need to find a job to afford my extents. Secondly, I can pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88068181818 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91192488913 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1407870123 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0769230769 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132205868077 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434756873847 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263201072271 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721485118057 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306221503507 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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