Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Alan,
I hope this letter finds you well. Firstly, thank you for sending memorable pictures of our trip. Moreover, it was one of the most memorable trip of my life. I recently saw the pictures, which you had sent, they are great. However, I would also like to apologise for not writing you early. As, I was busy with hectic work schedule.
Let me explain you further. Once we returned back from our trip, my immediate boss had already scheduled a meeting with a client to discuss about marketing plans. Furthermore, this client will increase our organisation's revenue and it was one of the major clients of our competitors. So, in order to get this client we had to do extensive research in very limited time. Luckily, we were able to complete our research and offer a great deal to our clients, which they were unable to reject.
So, due to this reason, I wasn't able to write back to you. Furthermore, at this point I would like to invite you for a party at my place next month, as it's my parents birthday and it would be a great opportunity for all of us to gather. Looking forward to see you people.
Regards
Arbu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alan, I hope this letter finds you well. First...
^^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to apologise for not writing you early. As, I was busy with hectic work schedule. ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I was busy with hectic work schedule. Let me explain you further. Once we retu...
^^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
... Let me explain you further. Once we returned back from our trip, my immediate boss had al...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts, which they were unable to reject. So, due to this reason, I wasnt able to ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... reject. So, due to this reason, I wasnt able to write back to you. Furthermore,...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... for a party at my place next month, as its my parents birthday and it would be a g...
^^^
Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...or all of us to gather. Looking forward to see you people. Regards Arbu
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g forward to see you people. Regards Arbu
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52427184466 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47159373035 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3181511866 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5714285714 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199941705639 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775514275476 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654485994737 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150689910701 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765895419713 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.