Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Alan,
I hope this letter finds you well. Firstly, thank you for sending memorable pictures of our trip. Moreover, it was one of the most memorable trip of my life. I recently saw the pictures, which you had sent, they are great. However, I would also like to apologise for not writing you early. As, I was busy with hectic work schedule.
Let me explain you further. Once we returned from our trip, my immediate boss had already scheduled a meeting with a client to discuss about marketing plans. Furthermore, this client will increase our organisation's revenue and it was one of the major clients of our competitors. So, in order to get this client we had to do extensive research in very limited time. Luckily, we were able to complete our research and offer a great deal to our clients, which they were unable to reject.
So, due to this reason, I was not able to write back to you. Furthermore, at this point I would like to invite you for a party at my place next month, as it is my parents birthday and it would be a great opportunity for all of us to gather. Looking forward to hear from your side.
Regards
Arbu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to apologise for not writing you early. As, I was busy with hectic work schedule. ...
^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...or all of us to gather. Looking forward to hear from your side. Regards Arbu
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45192307692 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46287148401 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.174786881 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1428571429 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205015801251 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750174724238 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645173755637 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150640127417 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764789211824 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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