Big establishment are people's choice than local shops. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, style of shopping has changed. These days people tend to look for options, where they can buy all goods under one roof. This concept has been in market for more than 3-4 decades. Some people believe it came into existence due to people's preferences and few believe it to be because of marketing techniques. This essay will highlight the factors, which have led to establishment of huge malls and superstores.
Initially, it was Wal-Mart which changed the way of shopping, and took an initiative and grabbed onto an opportunity by introducing the concept of “under one roof”. In our country, this was initially introduced by Metro and Makro. They were the first ones to cater the needs of people. People weren’t aware of this concept, as time passed and other market players moved into this business and awareness increased, the concept of local shops reduced day by day.
However, local shops still have their own importance, because large malls and shops are situated in different localities and are not in immediate reach of different people. Furthermore, importance of malls has increased with time. In past fresh vegetables, fruits and meat weren't available in different big marts, but with time the things have changed. In order to cater the needs of masses, new products have been introduced.
Nowadays, different schemes are usually introduced in order to have some sort of edge over competitors. In my opinion, things have changed due to marketing techniques and concept. however, people's choice and preference has acted as a fuel and has led to introduction of more big establishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80834876274 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5186741526 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162547640905 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475244604302 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459369867069 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942114155241 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030945603263 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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