Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
Globalisation, has had a positive impact on a lot of things. Mode of transportation, is one amongst them. However, in past it took months to travel from one place to another, but with technological developments and industrial revolution things have changed. Furthermore, after introduction of different methods, people still prefer travelling by car, as compared to other options such as; buses or trains. This essay will highlight the causes of why people prefer to travel by car and what incentives could be introduced by governments to promote usage of other methods.
Previously, vehicles were used to travel from one place to another and people who couldn't afford to have their own cars used to travel via public transport. However, with time usage of public buses has increased rapidly, as compared with past, still there is a vast majority that prefers to travel by cars. As per reports and analysis conducted by different marketing companies, comfort has been foremost the best reason why people prefer to travel by cars. As, people are not bound to obey and follow instructions and moreover, they are free to make their own choice and stay wherever they want to. Furthermore,people who travel by car are likely to be in groups and this option is more feasible economically.
Moreover, large families also prefer using car over trains, as it is more economical. At this point, government needs to put the paddle down and take this as an opportunity. They can increase taxes on roads and subsequently, introduce schemes for large families or groups to encourage people to travel via train. In India, subsidies and schemes were introduced to divert customers from roads to trains and a campaign was launched to create awareness and facilitate people.
Furthermore, government needs to create awareness regarding safe travelling and what benefits travelling through train and public transport has. This essay, highlighted the root causes of why people prefer travelling through car and how can governments divert it to public transports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2303030303 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92486255004 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2284418655 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3775830151 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122694719823 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086423632089 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245995749038 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488306419122 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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