Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.Why do you think this happens?What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
Modern transportation has brought an evolution in the way human beings used to travel in medieval times. It has made travel comfortable, faster and convenient. Thus many people prefer to travel by their cars rather than buses or trains as it makes their journey comfortable and faster. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate on this contentious topic. Additionally, I will also state some measures which the government can take to motivate people to travel by buses or trains.
Firstly people prefer to travel by cars as it faster and convenient as compared to buses or trains. For instance, while travelling from my home to office it usually takes me around 20 minutes on the other hand if I take a bus it will take me at least one hour as the bus has to stop following a designated route and stop at the all bus stops. Similarly while travelling from one place to another you may need to change multiple trains or buses thus making the journey inconvenient as compared to a car. For instance, from the downtown station to the central square mall you have to change three buses and two trains thus making the journey tiring and inconvenient. Additionally, in third world countries due to the lack of public transportation people have no choice but to travel by cars. For instance, in many cities in India poor public transportation has left no choice for the locals but to use their own car or hire cabs. Lastly, people in many countries find public transportation like buses or trains to be unsafe for women hence it not the preferred mode of commutation.
Hence governments globally should focus on upgrading the transportation infrastructure and put more frequent buses or trains on busy routes so that people find it more convenient to travel by buses and trains. Moreover, the government should keep separate coaches or seats for women, children and elderly so that it make their journey comfortable.
To conclude in my opinion the car will still be preferred mode of transportation however government can step up some measures as mentioned above to make public transportation much faster and comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, third, thus, while, as to, at least, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91364902507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89262320932 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490250696379 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3375673859 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359623694662 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140082206847 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111873700687 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222886978563 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113539030055 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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