A company is organising a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited places. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should:
• express That you want to join
• say why you think you should join
• explain why the organisers should select you
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you that I am interested in this trip to Japan for the language training course which you are organizing.
I am keen in joining the training module as it is an excellent opportunity for me to learn Japanese language, it will also help me to understand Japan as a country and give it will give me deep insights about their culture too.
As you are aware of the fact that we are interacting with overseas clients in english but learning local dialect will provide an edge over our competitors who are operating locally in such difficult territories. I am handling regional sales for North Asia, understanding language and culture and overcoming these barriers which make me more comfortable in handling sales for this region and in turn help me to grow business for the company.
Hence, i would request you to give my nomination a due consideration.
Yours sincerely
vinshu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-10 | Narges.s | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-11 | Elmira y | 81 | view |
| 2019-05-11 | Mahsa k | 78 | view |
| 2019-01-02 | ahmedarbani | 73 | view |
| 2018-12-06 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ow business for the company. Hence, i would request you to give my nomination...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a due consideration. Yours sincerely vinshu
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83945373757 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635220125786 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4809550913 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18389681508 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925565202051 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688175496644 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123531259365 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781203006001 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.