Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Governments from both developed and developing nations are focusing entirely on economic growth. While this may be a pivotal parameter to create jobs, bring investments but there are critics who believe that other factors like social security, public infrastructure, education and health are equally important. In my opinion although economic growth is important but government must also equally focus on other parameters for a sustainable growth of a nation. In the below essay I will discuss both sides with relevant examples and conclude with my opinion.
On one hand, economic growth is mandatory aspect to bring investments in a country which would further fuel creation of employment opportunities across different verticals. With these new investments and collection of additional funds through taxes government can focus on bettering the infrastructure, security, health and education facilities. For instance in developing countries like India, government is focusing on economic growth by attracting investment in manufacturing sector where by collection of taxes from these manufacturing plants are being deviated for creation of modern infrastructure like high-speed trains, better roads and educational facilities.
However on the other hand without stable political environment, social security, public infrastructure, education and health system it is very difficult for a nation to do economic progress. For instance in war-torn countries like Afghanistan and Syria investors are reluctant to invest due unstable political environment and security concerns.
In conclusion taking the above examples into consideration one cannot deny the fact that economic growth is not important however it must go hand in hand with other factors like social security, better infrastructure, healthcare and education system for ensuring sustainable growth of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94117647059 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17386322387 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7584623914 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.6 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159194773679 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720725283597 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475219248476 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101641878832 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04006635356 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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