You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:•Why you are writing to him•Why you cannot pay the rent•When you will pay the rent.

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter explain:
• Why you are writing to him
• Why you cannot pay the rent
• When you will pay the rent.

Dear Mr Saud,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to request to allow me an extension on the current month’s rental due to an unexpected financial crunch. Let me explain the situation in detail.

To elucidate unfortunately my company closed down its operations in India due to the ongoing slowdown in the telecom market, therefore, all the employees have been asked to leave and the full and final payment to the staff will be made in a few month’s time. Although I have found a new job and the employer has agreed to pay the wages in advance however due to some technical issue with my salary account the payment has not been credit. Hence I would not be able to pay this month’s rent on time.

As you are aware that as a tenant I am adhering to the contract and have been paying the rental in advance however this time I would request an extension till 15th May to make the payment along with the next month’s rent. I hope this arrangement will be acceptable to you and in case if you have any issues please contact me on my cell number.
Looking forward to your response
Yours sincerely
Saad Mubarak

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ccount the payment has not been credit. Hence I would not be able to pay this month&a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56097560976 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56914376837 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.841719748 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211521240956 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087947537698 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539235029031 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121313904727 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443612181004 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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