You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:Why you are writing to himWhy you cannot pay the rentWhen you will pay the rent.Write at least 150

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter explain:
Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent.
Write at least 150 words
Answer :
Dear Mr John,
I ,Sam, who is living on rent at your home ,need a favour from you as it is not possible for me to pay rent on time. firstly of all I want to explain you the reason behind it. You have heard about the financial crises faced by Amula Venture and company decided to shut down its operation in our city. All employees have given only half of their salaries . With that little amount of money someone can either pay rent or pay for food. I have already searched and joined new company. Even on my request they are ready to pay me in advance. According to company procedure, they could pay me after fifteen of this month and I will pay the whole amount to you at 16th of this month. I had already described you situation I am going through. I hope you cooperate. Still if you need to ask than let me know.
Your sincerely, Sam

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in reference to your advertisement in times News of last Wednesday seeking invitation to apply for a teaching role for night classes at your college.
I am interested in this position and would like to teach a course on Social studies. This course is designed to deliver the facts about how societies around the world evolved over the period and its impact over other societies. Furthermore, this three months course intents to teach the impact of changes in values and beliefs of society on the individuals. Needless to say, it is very important for any student to understand these concepts because it will help them adapt into foreign cultural environment as they decide to study or work abroad.
I have done my masters in this subject and worked seven years as a professional tutor delivering sessions in part time classes across several colleges of the city. Moreover, I am taking evening classes nowadays, therefore available for the night session.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ofessional tutor delivering sessions in part time classes across several colleges of the ...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... for the night session. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully,
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98285714286 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69148316596 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697142857143 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8018224291 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987667373349 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523470746806 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729576544241 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712828435208 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683091795797 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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