Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree.
As the transportation and settlement becomes easier, more people opt to settle in the country of their choice, which in turn leads to cities becoming more cosmopolitan. This trend has picked pace in the last decade and it’s the prime responsibility of the government to make people live together peacefully. Certainly, there are few predominant things which the government should do to avoid any sort of conflict among people.
Immigrants from other country bring unique skills with them, which are learned by local people and vice versa. This results in an increase in skill level of the entire population, which increases productivity and overall income level of the country. if the government has to benefit from the increased productivity, it has to make sure that proper skill transfer takes place by making immigrants eligible to work across the industries and job profiles.
People around the globe follow various religions, have their own cultural, social and spiritual beliefs. It is important for people to live together without conflicts so they can share their unique beliefs and enrich each other. Government can play a crucial role by establishing worship places for all religions and let people follow their beliefs freely. Over a period of time, people learn new ways of living a happy life from each other and can live a good one themselves.
If the government fails to ensure that people coming from other parts of the world can live harmoniously with locals, it will result into increased conflicts and people may stop coming into the country. It will have a further serious impact when its own people may not be accepted in other countries leading into a situation where limited professional skills and culture transfer takes place around the globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...nd overall income level of the country. if the government has to benefit from the ...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ple follow their beliefs freely. Over a period of time, people learn new ways of living a happ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, as to, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15172413793 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65256477416 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3852839605 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105176848074 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423936680632 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212433839326 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663094443761 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202966516502 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.