It is sometimes said that people should be encourage to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree
Nowadays job market has become more competitive and requires applicants to be able to perform roles apart from their regular business activities. Certainly, this requires candidates to have prior experience and practical skills rather than just subject knowledge. However, most of the jobs require theoretical knowledge in addition to complimentary skills learnt in previous jobs for enhanced performance, but former cannot be replaced by latter.
There are a large number of jobs which predominantly depends on the theoretically content acquired either through formal graduation courses or part-time professional courses. Consider the job of a teacher, until unless a teacher has adequate subject knowledge, it is not only difficult for them to teach students the basics of any course but also develop expertise in the subject for themselves. Same applies for other jobs like auditing and operations management.
On the contrary, there are few jobs which require more experience and practical skills. These jobs require the employee to have wide experience in handling difficult scenarios which may arise during the course of business and capability to effectively handle them. For example, a corporate banker needs to have more interpersonal skills to manage relationship with clients and experience to promptly resolve the transaction related issues which the client may face in order to have a long-lasting with the client.
Although, few jobs may demand more practical skills than theoretical knowledge but more jobs requires the latter without which it is impossible to deliver the job requirements at all. As far as I am concerned, I think applicants in future may need to possess both formal qualification and practical experience to beat the competition and secure a decent job; and they should work towards acquiring them from initial days itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...not be replaced by latter. There are a large number of jobs which predominantly depends on the...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...ing difficult scenarios which may arise during the course of business and capability to effectively ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50522648084 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95928577741 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4805239598 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.636363636 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772141447935 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341838866287 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312179118059 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052351617606 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232331925011 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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