Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.
Do you think this is positive or negative development?
With the economic development across societies, families have become more affluent and it has become easier for parent to buy numerous toys for their children. Some would argue that it is beneficial for the child, while others would counter this argument. Certainly, there are several thoughts favouring both view and its impact on a child.
Every human being has a natural tendency to accumulate more even though the need is met. Same applies to children, who want more and more toys, even they have countless toys to play with. Nowadays, parents also provide their children with whatever toys that have been asked for because they have limited time to spend with kids. Consequently, they try to compensate for the time by providing several toys to their child. But this has tremendous negative effect on the psychology of the child. Surely, a child will find it hard to understand the value of resources and concept of sharing later in life.
On the contrary, there are few benefits which arise from having a large number of toys. Firstly, a child has the opportunity to learn the working of a toy and develop interest towards basic principles of science. Moreover, toys become best companion when no one is around, especially nowadays because both parent are working in most of the families. Needless to mention, children associate a quite a few childhood memories with toys to cherish once they grow up.
Although, there are advantages of having a large number of toys and it plays a crucial role in the overall development of a child, however parent should not spoil their children by providing any toy that has been asked for and make them understand the value of resources as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...re few benefits which arise from having a large number of toys. Firstly, a child has the opportun...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the best'.
Suggestion: become the best
...c principles of science. Moreover, toys become best companion when no one is around, especi...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lthough, there are advantages of having a large number of toys and it plays a crucial role in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91637630662 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50120829376 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3114787892 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0470865971694 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209258200092 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032401535816 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315942555306 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145136969012 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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