YOU HAVE A FULL TIME JOB AND ARE ALSO DOING A PART TIME EVENING COURSE. YOU NOW FIND THAT YOU CANNOT CONTINUE THE COURSE.
WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR TUTOR. IN YOU LETTER:
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr Singh,
I am writing to request you to allow me leaves for one month in order to pursue studies for a qualification course in management.
I have been working in the same job profile for the last three years which has enriched me almost with all the aspects of the present role, and it is an appropriate time for me to diversify into more challenging roles. Therefore, I have decided to do a part time qualification course in Business management.
The course is designed to teach candidates work management and interpersonal skills, which are essential for handling teams as I will progress ahead. Furthermore, it will help me manage my work better and improve coordination with my colleagues. Without any doubt, I will become an impeccable human resource which the organization can utilize for future positions, in addition to increased productivity and shorten turnaround time in the current role.
I look forward to your permission and grant of leaves to pursue this qualification.
Yours sincerely,
Deepak Gupta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...oles. Therefore, I have decided to do a part time qualification course in Business manage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15976331361 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06618517778 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3519624784 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107835461853 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466509402128 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399598228747 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062386051205 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324767636801 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.