A company is organising a trip abroad for language training to a number of limited places. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should:
• express That you want to join
• say why you think you should join
• explain why the organisers should select you
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I recently, got to know about the language training program our organization is arranging abroad. Firstly, it's a great initiative, as this will provide employees with an opportunity to learn something new. Moreover, this will provide them with an opportunity to take a break from normal schedule. Furthermore, it requested to consider me as a candidate for this language course, because my work is mostly related with international clients.
Let me explain you in detail. As you are aware about my job responsibilities, which involve a-lot of interaction with international clients, people who speak different languages and are living in various parts of world. Moreover, this training will provide me with an opportunity to polish my skills further and improve them; by doing so, I will be able to get more international clients and in long run this will help organisation achieve it's goals and increase profit margins.
Therefore, it is requested to consider my application for language training abroad. As, it would be a great opportunity for me to grow professionally and personally.
Yours Sincerely
Alan Border
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...anization is arranging abroad. Firstly, its a great initiative, as this will provid...
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...ly related with international clients. Let me explain you in detail. As you are...
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...its goals and increase profit margins. Therefore, it is requested to consider m...
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...to grow professionally and personally. Yours Sincerely Alan Border
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...ally and personally. Yours Sincerely Alan Border
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...lly. Yours Sincerely Alan Border
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30481283422 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13653573024 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8944811394 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138609309914 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686251147918 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642160021374 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970055106556 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00882372415356 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.