Many people prefer to travel by car rather than buses or trains.
Why do you think this happens?
What can government do to motivate people travel by buses or trains?
This is a known fact that people commute from one place to another. Specifically, they use their own or rented car instead of opting for any of the public means of transport. In my view there are concerning reasons for doing so and I will give some solutions on how to tackle the issue.
Firstly using car specifically to go to one place from another has surplus benefits. One of which is faster arrival time to destination which is not quite possible when travelling by trains or buses particularly inside the cities where traffic is already teeming. To illustrate from my personal experience, it takes 15 minutes to reach to my office from home when travelling by car where as in bus it takes around 45 minutes due to traffic congestion. Secondly, when going to a particular place if there is no direct connectivity between two points then the traveler has to change and opt for multiple or different transport medium which could be huge inconvenience at times. In addition to that, travelling by car makes journey much safer for female commuter especially during night. For all of the above mentioned reasons anyone chooses the other over trains and buses.
Since is no easy solution to such a problem, there needs to be an active involvement from government bodies and commuters. To begin with there should be more number of routes especially in the area which is densely populated. Civil authorities need to also provide better infrastructure in public transport so that daily commuters are more keen in choosing them over cars. In addition to that there should be separate coaches and seats for women, elderly folks and disabled people so it is easy, safe and convenient for them.
In conclusion, yes there are a lot of commuters using cars for transportation but if there are better and faster options in trains and buses are available, then everyone will start travelling in them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...office from home when travelling by car where as in bus it takes around 45 minutes due t...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e commuter especially during night. For all of the above mentioned reasons anyone chooses ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87616099071 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71996885964 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59133126935 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2438081901 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151628956801 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050103995983 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392498258983 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954763490012 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398913451335 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.