In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Countryside land for every town is most needed to all as tourist attraction. In many countries, homes need to be build in the available spaces but landscape must be left like a free space as a greenary to homes .I believe that protecting countryside is most important than building new homes throughout the places. Further, my views are explained briefly in the following essay.
Firstly, every individual will think to have a own residence. They decide to construct homes in a land available but should also think about planning usage of space. At the same time, one have to think for lawn to maintain greenary at outskirts. Here, building a new home not only include just planning its view but it also attracts many tourists, visitors. In some communities there will be a rule as all houses must be alike. These type of communities should include some free space at their surroundings so that it also helps to reduce health issues caused due to different kinds of pollution.
Secondly, protecting countryside will also reduce pollution. As the years goes population getting increased which results in more occupation in a country. However, a person must think about all the things while planning for new home. For example, If there are kids one should plan for play area which is most useful. Play area includes both indoor and outdoor. Countryside lands must be used to construct parks, game zones etc. All these indirectly help the residence for evening walks and also for children's to play after their school hours.
After having considered all the above mentioned points, we can finally come to a conclusion that everyone must think about scenary spaces before building a home. Leaving freespace helps us in many ways so everyone must think a while before constructing house in countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03986710963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63475467705 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7342434 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299999086698 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829440739972 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100238629963 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191655153005 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891448734713 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.