Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends . In your letter:
. thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
. explain why you didn't write earlier.
. invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Anita and Gurpeet,
I'm writing this letter to express my gratitude regarding the remarkable holiday at your home town, and the lovely photos which we took it in Mumbai.
I received your package on last Saturday, when I was about to leave town for a business trip. I've just arrived to Toronto today. Thank you for sending me the photos of my trip to India. Looking at them remind me so many happy moments that we had at your place, and the hospitality you extended to me. I felt completely pampered by both of you. You surrounded me with warm friends, good cuisine, spectacular sights , great shopping, unforgettable cultural events and laughter- filled evenings. I'd have been lost without your wonderful accompany. I can't thank you enough.
I'm really sorry for the delay in acknowledgment. As I was busy in my business trip. I had to attend a very important meeting, so I went to Dubai to finalize the business deal with one of the IT Software Organization . As they were implementing Time Trax Attendance System in our company. Staying there for 3 days , I just returned back to Canada today and instantly replying to your letter.
As I know you've always wanted to visit my place. So why don't you plan a holiday and stay with me this summer. The weather is awesome at that time of year, all tourist sites are open and I could take 2 weeks off from work. We could drive to Niagara Falls, Thousand Islands, Montreal, Ottawa and Quebec City. I would be thrilled if you both could make it.
Thank you both again for the tremendous holiday and the portraits which I already have framed and hanged it on my bed room wall.
Hope to see you both soon.
Best Regards,
Sadaf Alam
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Anita and Gurpeet, Im writing this letter to express my grati...
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...bout to leave town for a business trip. Ive just arrived to Toronto today. Thank yo...
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...riends, good cuisine, spectacular sights , great shopping, unforgettable cultural ...
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...l events and laughter- filled evenings. Id have been lost without your wonderful a...
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Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ost without your wonderful accompany. I cant thank you enough. Im really sorry fo...
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... accompany. I cant thank you enough. Im really sorry for the delay in acknowled...
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... sorry for the delay in acknowledgment. As I was busy in my business trip. I had t...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... finalize the business deal with one of the IT Software Organization . As they were im...
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Suggestion: .
...with one of the IT Software Organization . As they were implementing Time Trax Att...
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...h one of the IT Software Organization . As they were implementing Time Trax Attend...
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Suggestion: ,
...in our company. Staying there for 3 days , I just returned back to Canada today an...
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Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...pany. Staying there for 3 days , I just returned back to Canada today and instantly replying ...
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...d instantly replying to your letter. As I know youve always wanted to visit my ...
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...y replying to your letter. As I know youve always wanted to visit my place. So why...
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...always wanted to visit my place. So why dont you plan a holiday and stay with me thi...
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Message: Use simply: 'a Thousand'.
Suggestion: A Thousand
... work. We could drive to Niagara Falls, Thousand Islands, Montreal, Ottawa and Quebec Ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68106312292 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52485694927 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 127.690721649 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1187338243 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0454545455 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6818181818 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.40909090909 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377103878444 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939927748049 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762605686783 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147897276001 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865445128639 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.