You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.In your letterexplain why you want to take time off work.give details of the amount of time you need.suggest how you

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter

explain why you want to take time off work.
give details of the amount of time you need.
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

Dear Mr. Chris,

I am writing this letter to notify you that I need a short break from work.

As you know, during the last six months we were working hard on the software application for the Efrotech Services and I often had to work at night. Our team did well and we were able to meet the deadline. Unfortunately, those stressful months had negative impact on my mental health.

I want to take one month vacation from the work because I am planning to visit Hawaii to surf and need some rest to relax my mind and also want to explore some renowned attractions. I will depart on 1st July and resume the office on 1st August.

During my absences Mr. John will handle the ongoing project. He knows every detail and I am sure he will able to lead the team and will be able to resolve any unexpected issues. Also, I will be available on Skype and see my email in the evenings for the support. I hope you can understand my situation.

I look forward to hearing from your optimistic response.

Yours Sincerely,
Sadaf Alam

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...depart on 1st July and resume the office on 1st August. During my absences Mr...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40441118274 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2135363309 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227583065049 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731873206194 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799429951303 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128443587022 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839567822665 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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