Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Adam and Sarah,
I hope this letter finds you both in the pink of health. I am delighted to see your letter and the photos of our holiday. Thanks for sharing the beautiful clicks with me, I am rejoicing all the moments spent with you guys again by looking at the photos. Thailand is such a wonderful country with breathtaking views and clear beaches. The holiday is over, but I will never forget the time we spent together. Thanks for such an amazing holiday.
I apologize for not writing to you guys earlier, as I was busy with my office chores. It was a long holiday, that means a lot of work was piled up for me with some urgent deadlines. I had to do overtime in order to get it done.
I’d like to invite you both to visit Pakistan. Summer is the perfect time to visit north Pakistan to see its lush greenery nature and breathtaking views. You can come to Karachi, and we all can go together to the north by car. It will be an adventurous trip where you will not only enjoy nature but also the humble nature of the people here.
I would love to see you both soon. Take care and write back.
Warm wishes,
Tom
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38785046729 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24303446219 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9168842464 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347725471528 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962097280979 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746414823772 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144070548999 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109601320543 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.