You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter•Give details of your visit to the restaurant•Explain the reas

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter

• Give details of your visit to the restaurant

• Explain the reason for the celebration

• Say what was good about the food and service

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in correspondence to my visit to your restaurant in the afternoon of 8th of September. I reserved 10 seats at your restaurant to celebrate my college graduation party with my friends. This party served us two purpose, firstly, graduation, and secondly, a farewell as everyone would embark on their journey after college, thus making it memorable in our lives. One of my friends, suggested your restaurant as he had been there and was pleased by the service and food.

As soon as we entered in the restaurant, we were delighted by the décor of it. In addition to that, the provided service was top notch. While enjoying the service and décor, waiter guided us through the menu and offered the specials, which was not other than my favorite wagyu beef steak. The beef steak served with butter and mushroom sauce was delicious, every bite of it spoke of its worth and it will be unjust not to highlight that it was the best cut of meat, I have ever had in my entire life.

I again would like to thank you for such a wonderful service, and food. We would visit your restaurant sometime again soon.

Yours faithfully,

Tom

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...ition to that, the provided service was top notch. While enjoying the service and décor, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72115384615 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56152113646 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0164513337 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225446744751 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924268051663 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832404648495 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152876925409 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971588755356 0.0580467560999 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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