Leaving Country & Living Abroad
With the immense growth in population and unmanaged governance in a country, living a peaceful & balance life has become quite a big hurdle for individuals. Pros and cons are always there, so making a decision vary from person to person and what are their priorities in life. Mostly people leave their country just to provide a good lifestyle to their family.
One the benefit of moving abroad is the assurance of having basic necessities of life, which is quite difficult in third world countries. Multiple factors needs to be considered while making a decision which includes lack of security, clean water and electricity etc. In a country like ours, security is a major concern: where law and order is not maintained and implemented, whereas in developed countries the case is totally opposite. Safety and security plays a vital role in making a mind to move abroad.
As there are many advantages of living abroad, there are some disadvantages as well, which most of the people don’t realize before leaving. One of them is the loneliness they feel after leaving their country. A family-oriented person feels difficulty and nostalgic while staying alone. Family gathering during cultural festivals and other occasions can put him in depression.
So in my opinion if a person’s priority is to provide luxuries and security to his/her family and does not care about the cultural festivals or religious difference. Then moving to other country will be a wise decision else priorities should be adjusted prior to decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...oving abroad is the assurance of having basic necessities of life, which is quite difficult in th...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...order is not maintained and implemented, whereas in developed countries the case ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, third, well, whereas, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.172 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82988583467 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.696452014 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18876309625 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569236994829 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518302654215 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989464530674 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349273849523 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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