Letter to a friend recommending a restaurant for a family celebration.
In your letter, you should tell:
where it is
how you know it
why you recommend this restaurant.
Dear John,
I am writing to suggest you an amazing restaurant where you could spend some quality time with your family to celebrate your promotion which you got yesterday. The restaurant name is “Pirates of Grill”, which is situated at MG Road, Gurgaon. The restaurant is only 100 meters away from Sikandarpur metro station, it could be covered on foot in 10 minutes only.
Last year, I celebrated my birthday with my family and friends at this wonderful restaurant, it was an awesome experience. Even though the restaurant was a little noisy, it was worth to spend some quality time with your family members due to its scenic theme and pleasant-sounding music. Even I recommended it to many friends and relatives since my last birthday.
I am suggesting this restaurant now because you wanted to celebrate a great occasion with your entire family. Recently, you got a promotion and I believe this is the best time to enjoy and visit this amazing place with your loved ones. I am certain that you would not regret visiting this restaurant. Moreover, you would thank me for this suggestion.
Finally, I would like to congratulate for the promotion.
All the best and have a great time with your family there.
Best wishes,
Jay Larosa
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99526066351 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82088875277 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578199052133 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5176628767 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0769230769 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293753576124 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103204592688 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757088637517 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137194966381 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857392079503 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.