Letter to a manager about the book you order online but you didn’t received until now.In the letter, you should:give the details of the orderdescribe why do you need it now,and say what do you want the company do.

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Letter to a manager about the book you order online but you didn’t received until now.

In the letter, you should:
give the details of the order
describe why do you need it now,
and say what do you want the company do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to appraise you with the current status of my online order from your website as 'undelivered'.

I have ordered a book, 'Turning points' written by late Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam, also the honourable former president of India. My order number is A5623, for the ease of tracking purpose and expected delivery was yesterday at my home address - 29, Sunset Street, London.

I was completely relied on your website for this book as I have to present it to my friend on his birthday. Due to carelessness by your shipping department to dispatch it to a wrong address as confirmed from customer care executive, now I am running shortage of time to arrange it from somewhere else. Also yours is the only website selling edition of this book. Therefore, it is really important for me to get a prompt delivery from you.

I hope you realize the value of a satisfied customer. Therefore, I would like you to schedule the urgent delivery of this order by today only. Moreover, I have paid extra charges for prompt delivery, which was not made by your site. Hence, I am entitled for its refund.

Hoping for a prompt action from you regarding this matter!

Yours faithfully,
Ell Green

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ime to arrange it from somewhere else. Also yours is the only website selling editi...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7558685446 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57305267191 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2814642866 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154541332978 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648820493963 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596820414568 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10724593194 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488861488007 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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