Letter to manager and asking for suggestion for sponsor
Dear Mr.Peter
This is regarding sponsorship we discussed last week and I would like to give some options regarding the same
As you are aware, we have local children sports team and they are well popular in nearby districts. They are known for their spirit and never give up attitude. I spoke to Team manager last week and I came to know they are looking for sponsorship as they are heading to Mid-west finals in Los Angeles. I believe this is the right time we can hit the iron. Since it's a final game we will have good numbers for the event and our brand can reach to good number of school students.
On the other hand, we might also think about sponsoring Local brand for two open-air concerts. Since it's a summer time here, concerts can be a good option provided we are targeting youths. I have attended concerts and they seems to have good number.
Considering both the options, I would like to prefer former one than the latter. Main reason being the age group we target. As we sell clothing for uniform and other stationery, it will be a good option to target school students.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Jones
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: summer
... for two open-air concerts. Since its a summer time here, concerts can be a good option pro...
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Suggestion: seem
...uths. I have attended concerts and they seems to have good number. Considering ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...t school students. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours Sincerely, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81642512077 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2965514919 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3080808067 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6923076923 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132405927462 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469607109998 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617392144572 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058565480851 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538128189448 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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