Working as a team or working al alone, which is best. Please suggest
We have seen mixed option about students taking part in organized group activities or occupy themselves on their own.
Lets see both the options in detail below.
It will be a good learning for students to take part in group activities becuase they will tend to learn team management skills.
Working in a team will always help the children to become a better team member. It is inevitable that student will be the part of some team in future so lesssons learnt here will be very beneficial. Additionally, Recent student reveals that the good team member will be able to perform his task and help others in quick time. Also, they will not hesitate to go out looking for answers for their issues. Also, team captain is someone who runs the show. Once he/she gets the requirement, they divide the work among the team and starts working on his activities. They will be the single point of contact and they will make sure that the work is completed in time.
Alternatively, there is a option for students to occupy themselves on their own. Good thing about this perpestive is, they will invest time in their area of interest and give their best to get the work done. Additionally, they will be running the show from the start till the end, hence they will be very versed in all the parts of the work rather than the single task.
On comparison of both, I prefer working in a team because, it will be great learning for the children. As they grow up, they will be able to perform tasks assigned to them and working in a team wouldn't be an issue then. Also, Children will be able to help other team members and get assistance from friends to excel in work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...es or occupy themselves on their own. Lets see both the options in detail below. ...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
...ivities becuase they will tend to learn team management skills. Working in a team ...
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Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... in time. Alternatively, there is a option for students to occupy themselve...
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Line 19, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... assigned to them and working in a team wouldnt be an issue then. Also, Children will b...
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Line 19, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sistance from friends to excel in work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58666666667 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31584877649 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8158410078 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174551406971 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812627458665 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745710259979 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832573363953 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773075033067 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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