Issue with internet services, write a letter for the same.

Essay topics:

Issue with internet services, write a letter for the same.

Dear Mr.John

I am writing to explain about the issue i faced with the router I purchased recently in your shop.

I have been using ABC Fibernet services for the past two years for my office and speed was amazing. We had a pleasant experience and never had any issues with connections whatsoever. Since our office is expanding, we purchased the XYZ router last week from your store to support the extended coverage. Unfortunately, network speed dropped down significantly and we were not able to connect to the internet continously. We tried unplugging and plugging in again couple of times but no luck. We had a project deliverables due next week and network issue is seriously impacting our work.

I have requested colleagues to connect from home meanwhile.

It would be great if you can send someone who can look at the issue and work on the possible fix. I would be glad if you can replace the router since it might be the issue. Kindly let the technical team to know about the issue and request them to drop me a note before hoping in.

Looking forward to work with you again.

Thanks

KK

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John I am writing to explain about the ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I am writing to explain about the issue i faced with the router I purchased recen...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77435897436 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58761527168 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9487073269 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163284069313 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495290141071 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049064385456 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853916066483 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619689343118 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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