Garbage collector not working properly. Write a letter to council head for the same.

Essay topics:

Garbage collector not working properly. Write a letter to council head for the same.

Dear Mr.Jones,

I am writing to let you know that the issue faced by local neighborhood here in Chicago north side due Garbage disposal system. I am staying in Howard Street and used the Garbage can#43 for almost three years in a row. We never had problems earlier and garbage can will be cleaned and emptied every week.

But unfortunately, I couldn't see it happening in last one month. Garbage has been overflowing and it is not recycled for the same period. As a result of this, we couldn't cross the street because of foul smell. I fear that the children and elderly people might get affected because of the nearby park which they use often. Also, we are seeing increase in number of mosquitoes because of the same reason.

I would strongly request you to send someone from the municipality to take a look and take the adequate action. As it is a residential neighborhood, it might affect the elderly people and children easily. Awaiting for the cleaning of Garbage can soon.

Yours Sincerely

Praveen

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jones
Dear Mr.Jones, I am writing to let you know that...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... every week. But unfortunately, I couldnt see it happening in last one month. Gar...
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Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...he same period. As a result of this, we couldnt cross the street because of foul smell....
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Line 13, column 206, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...the elderly people and children easily. Awaiting for the cleaning of Garbage can soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, you know, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56566021621 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5036427697 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147862803728 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541269270033 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691464455262 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093776740352 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253556386871 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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