Overall, the birth rates of both nations decreased over the period of 80 years.
Although the two trends were similar in terms of a general decline, the birth rate
of the USA in most years was higher than that of China.
In the 1920-1935 period, the birth rate in America fluctuated, although it always
remained above 10%. However, in the following decade, the American birth
rate fell sharply to below 5%. In the 1950s, the figure for the USA increased
significantly to exactly 15%, which was its highest point during the 80-year
period. Throughout the remainder of the period, there was a gradual decline in
the US birth rate, which fell to 7% by the year 2000.
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Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 561.0 937.175257732 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 206.0 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37206820632 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 127.690721649 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 159.3 290.88556701 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4354906546 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22697053208 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115583949566 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413219133242 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955620652361 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644933232299 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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