Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing to let you know that I read your advertisement for the requirement of a helper this summer and I might be interested in helping you.
My name is Eric Broocks and I am staying on the outer ring road, near Maruti temple. I understand that you need a person to look after your house while interior designing and furniture work is happening in your home, this summer. I would say I am the perfect one for this work because I am a healthy 27 years old guy with the skill of managing people along with taking care of multiple tasks. Actually, I am a factory manager in New York City.
Ever since I started working, I have never sat ideal at home. I am visiting my sister this summer and while my sister and her husband are working, I won’t have any work to do. Fortunately, I read your advertisement and felt that this is a perfect opportunity to work for a few hours a day and I might get a chance to connect with other people around the town.
I would be available to visit your house for 3-4 hours, starting from 10 O’clock in the morning to 2 O’clock in the afternoon. It would take almost 1 hour for me to travel to your place or return to my house. Moreover, I have the responsibility of picking up my nephew from school at 3:00 pm. Therefore I would only be able spare four hours maximum.
I hope your hunt for a helper ends here.
Yours Faithfully
Eric Brooks.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ng up my nephew from school at 3:00 pm. Therefore I would only be able spare four hours m...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34210526316 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52589338126 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9145965444 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259802248152 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798152745566 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710259231252 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134050026492 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458144490238 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ng up my nephew from school at 3:00 pm. Therefore I would only be able spare four hours m...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34210526316 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52589338126 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9145965444 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259802248152 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798152745566 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710259231252 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134050026492 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458144490238 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.