Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I would like to join as a volunteer for the work at the museum regarding which you had put a notice recently.
I am interested in this offer as it will help me to improve my knowledge on the historical background and preservation methods of various exhibits in your museum which include fossils, aged sculptures and rare ornaments. This experience will be useful as I am planning to pursue a degree on history and archeology.
As part of my preparation for the course, I have been studying a lot on various techniques required to protect the historically valuable items in a museum which will be beneficial when I work in the museum. If you give me an opportunity to do this unpaid work then I can assure you that I will be careful with the handling of the valuables in the museum.
Apart from this, not only I am available to work at any time of the day but also ready to work on the weekends.
I request you to kindly consider me for this job.
Yours faithfully,
Ms.Sruthy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e beneficial when I work in the museum. If you give me an opportunity to do this u...
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Line 14, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sruthy
... for this job. Yours faithfully, Ms.Sruthy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49740932642 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72829294213 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.199391047 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327270509713 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134359723828 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910250245038 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178002775331 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100756729795 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.