A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary work. You would like to do voluntary work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for work. In your letter
1. Explain what you want to do voluntary work at the museum.
2. Describe the skills and qualities you have that would be useful.
3. Give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in an opportunity to work with your organization ‘Ahmedabad Museum’ as a volunteer. As I am an English student, it would be a better chance for me to work in your library section as a part-time instructor which is what you are looking for.
Perhaps, as I said earlier, I am an English student and pursuing my masters in English literature. I am very interested in the position. The plethora of information on your organization’s online webpages regarding the volunteering activities has got me extremely motivated and enthusiastic to join your team. Certainly, my skills are well suited for this position as well.
On the other hand, this job will also give me a hand in paying my university fees. I am available during Thursday, Saturday and Sunday. I will be reached at 9876543210 or via email through a@a.com.
In a meantime, please let me know if you need any additional information. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
SM
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...or which is what you are looking for. Perhaps, as I said earlier, I am an Engl...
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...76543210 or via email through a@a.com. In a meantime, please let me know if you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, thus, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87283236994 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14938206173 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3160865123 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199953837112 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626810387348 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745545430565 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11226977676 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111204954905 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.