In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that nowadays, people are often to eat fast food. Consequently, they are putting themselves in a health problem. Now a day’s obesity is a major health issue. Many people believe that increasing rate of tax on those food, it can be helps to reduce the fast food eaters. To be honest, I disagree with this opinion because one statement can not to be enough.
On the one hand, many people who believe that, this one statement could be enough and they assumption like; increasing a tax amount might be an impact on people who ate fast food. If government is increasing a tax, so people go outer monthly one or two times. It is good step for their perception. Hence, eating an outside food is not reliable for a new generation or as well as older generation. Eating a fast food can cause a many dangerous aspects like, disease, food poisoning, diabetes and the main is obesity and so on. That is why government has to increased price of text might be reduced change of fast food eaters.
On the other hand, I believe that, this statement could not to be enough. If this one step will be taken, inflation will increased nothing else. Secondly people will start robbery, vehicle thief and many more, if tax will increase. Because of, poor people and as well as middle class people wants to fulfill their family's requirement. Thirdly, if government increased a tax on fast food, people do not get worried about this because, they think that it is a part of inflation. So they do not take it seriously. There are many others way to reduce the fast food eaters. If timely steps are taken this problem can be mitigate.
Firstly, Government has to start a charity for all the people and spread awareness about the food. Secondly, government should hire people and visit every fast food counter for cross checking. Thirdly, many outlets used third quality of products, so Government has to ban that outlet and taking high find of that owners. Government also bans those outlets, which use temptation to the peoples. So if these types of steps will be taken, so might be possible to break the chain of those people who are fond of fast food.
In conclusion, this statement is not reliable for stopping a people to eat a fast food. I opine that, awareness is a most important for a people. If they took it seriously, this problem can be addressed. So that is why, I disagree with this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61214953271 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48921597583 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5614726879 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315926027801 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10174417705 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645303276608 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216748414972 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366656302966 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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