You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter pertaining the advertisement you posted in the ‘We Australian’ magazine and I think I can be the best choice that you will have to babysit your child as I have already done babysitting for two months in Sydney.
To begin with, I am a student and due to recent global corona pandemic, our university had decided to take an online lecture. And as I am in the last year, I have only lectures for two days a week for 2 Hours and that’s why I will be free for rest of the days.
Secondly, I have expertise in handling children as they group up with me really quick. In addition, during my leisure time, I will take them out with me for site seeing of the beautiful places nearby. If you are interested in hiring me then email me on a@a.com or contact me on 9876543210.
Looking forward for your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, second, secondly, then, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46625766871 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59481132379 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680981595092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8231846421 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 4.34317383033 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276098999651 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985089910017 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742235179319 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158038076464 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726882674194 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.