The friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He / She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. why you think your friend would enjoy a camping.
2. Describe some possible disadvantages.
3. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.
Dear Max,
I hope you are doing well. It was heart melting after receiving your letter after long time and as well concerning advise for your first camping this summer holiday.
Firstly, I have done a lot much of camping in past and I am glad to know that you are also interested in camping. I would suggest you to do camping in Manali these holidays. It would be a super excitement if, I also join you in that camp. I hope you have no trouble I if join you.
On the other hand, everything has its pros and cons and so do the camping. Your enjoyment and site seeing are some pros but cons are also not less. While camping, you need to take care of carnivorous has they hunt in night. As well as, sometimes at lower altitude you may feel dizzy due to lack of oxygen.
All in all, I suggest once in a life camping experience because it left a lot of exciting memories. Sometime it gives a new friend as well. I hope you like my advice and revert me back with a date to book our camp. Eagerly waiting for your answer.
Your lovingly,
Sunny
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22388059701 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21412599057 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8372069639 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.6 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326265035268 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10202521332 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098043048733 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18353172363 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950317883725 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.