The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory

Essay topics:

The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Here, we have flowchart. The flowchart illustrates the production of colored plastic paper clips in a small factory.
Overall, there are started to molten plastic with mix up color, then checking the strength of clip, all process has been done then, it is going to packaging and distribute at store. However, some clips are reject, which have bad strength.
Firstly, molten plastic has been molded clips by different colors( Red, Blue, Yellow ) and it is move at quality control, at there machine is check that clip strength, if that clip is defected, it has been rejected but that clip condition is good then, it is going at sort by hand, at there they are separate clips in two parts, single color and mixed color clip.
In the next, it is going in quality control but here, they are check the mix and single color clip. All process has been settle, then it is move in packaging department, at there they are packed all clip and good to go despatch in the stores.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ps by different colors Red, Blue, Yellow and it is move at quality control, at th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61627906977 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27966295081 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.525999889 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243505455238 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158366394944 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19881466293 0.0843802449381 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209809180533 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194327602153 0.0819641961636 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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