The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory

Essay topics:

The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

The flowchart depicts how plastic paper clips of different colors are manufactured in a small industrial establishment.

Overall, there are six stages included in this process, which start off with plastic being molten and end with packing and distributing the final products.

Firstly, molten plastic will be provided. Next, the plastic will go through a stage of which the purpose is to have them colorized into one out of three possible colors: red, blue, and yellow. After having been colored, the plastic will then go through quality control. At this stage, machines will ensure the strength of the products. If the quality of which is mediocre, it will be rejected.

The process continues when the qualified paper clips are then sorted out by hand. Subsequently, the decision will be made upon whether the colors of the products should be single or mixed. This will then be double-checked during the second quality control. Finally, the chosen paper clips will be packed and despatched before being put out on the market.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14792899408 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60664152152 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4703927287 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164013516095 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714769672584 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871166321024 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130329783112 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112761916777 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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