In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
It is true, that many people are suffering from hunger in over the world. In agriculture sector to much technology available but less resources, natural disasters although farmers have lack of knowledge etc. That's why some crops are damage due to we have not enough cereals. That's why people are facing many types of health problem.
First of all, this situation happens in only one reason that country is in underdevelopment or unevenly food supplies form distributors. That country cannot face any natural trouble because they have lack of technology, and they have not any financial support from the government due to these researchers cannot find any new medicine for crops. For instance, Africa one of the poorest country, they have not enough technology. So, crops are growing very barely exist. Nowadays, farmers are facing many types of insects molest, and they have not any toxin to save crops. Moreover, climate change is also one of the bad cursed for farmers and geographical problem is also aggravated. Like, flood, famine, etc., this types of issues is mainly to damage crops.
On the other hand, some country is richer in crops as well as they have good technology to control all situation in agriculture. For example, India has rich harvest of crops, Indian farmers have heavy crops of wheat and India has also advance technology for agriculture. So, some countries are need to develop agriculture area for protect crops. Furthermore, solution is the best way to manage this problem. Some countries who is developed, they are come to tackle this types of problems.
In addition, Developed countries also help to poor country to provide technology, farmers training and share knowledge for agriculture due to this world can tackle this hunger problem and people have a good food source. Climate change is depending on nature, but we can try to tackle that problem. Otherwise, it will impact the whole world in a negative way.
To sum up, it is true that people are facing hunger problem and agriculture area are also face natural effect, but the thing is how to tackle that problem and now most of the countries are focusing in this area and provide more knowledge and financial support to farmers due to this, we will definitely protect our agriculture area to face this types of problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96640826873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57891493374 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459948320413 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6121423408 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.35 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195046986303 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663318548369 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632541111342 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135950367598 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580374609941 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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