Dear Stella,
How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I received your letter last week and learned that you would like my advice on going for camping trip this summer. I really appreciate that you approached me for an advice and I will be more than happy to help you.
In my opinion, I think you should definitely go ahead with the camping holiday as I am sure you will have a great time. Since the location of the camp is near the lake and is surrounded by nature, it is an ideal place for you as you are fond of natural surroundings. Also, there will be many activities and games during the camp which I am sure you will enjoy as you have always been very enthusiastic when it comes to participating in games.
The only drawbacks that you would face while you are on the camp is an uncomfortable washroom and the scorching weather. However, it is manageable as it is a matter of 3-4 days only.
Once you are back, would you like to come along with me for another camping holiday? We have never been together for a camping holiday before and I am sure it will be a lot of fun. I will wait to hear from you.
Best regards,
Tina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...d learned that you would like my advice on going for camping trip this summer. I really ...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on going for camping trip this summer. I really appreciate that you approached m...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so, thus, well, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26244343891 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34835961884 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.740628906 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4615384615 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270207492034 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10085819826 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916649777203 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170867212863 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893102661407 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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