Dear Tina,
I hope you and everyone in your family are fine. I received your letter yesterday and realise that you have faced some problem at your workplace. I am glad that you reached out to me for this. Firstly, there is absolutely no need to worry for whatever has happened. As you already know that I have been in the same situation before, I totally understand your difficulty.
If you remember, I was asked to manage three person’s work along with my work for almost two months. I was said that recruitment are in process and I will be relieved from the burden soon, but it didn’t happen for three months. Since the pressure was affecting my health and personal life, I took the courage and spoke to my Supervisor. Thankfully, my problem was heard and taken into consideration within a week.
Similarly, I would suggest you to speak to your boss about the stress that you are facing. If he is unavailable, at least drop an email describing the issue. I am sure your boss will hear you and have some solution.
Do let me know if you need my help in anything else. I’d be happy to help you!
Your dear friend,
Shilpa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e faced some problem at your workplace. I am glad that you reached out to me for ...
^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...Firstly, there is absolutely no need to worry for whatever has happened. As you already k...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...u remember, I was asked to manage three person’s work along with my work for almost tw...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55339805825 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50331103203 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1235129604 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42236112542 0.216113520407 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142182732665 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107942681862 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221978987028 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113905672262 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.