Nowadays, people have started developing an interest in crime novels and TV crime dramas. As a result, they have become very popular in many countries. In my opinion, too much reading and watching crime fiction genre books and TV shows is not appropriate as it may affect our mental health at times.
Crime fiction has become an interest to many people due to several reasons. The primary reason is that it is relatable to real life situations. Many crime novels and TV shows develop stories that touch the emotions of individuals and is drafted in a way that people visualize themselves in those scenarios. As a result, they get completely involved in the story and be keen in knowing the end. Also, people feel that instances shown in the TV shows may happen to them in real life so watching these will create an awareness of how to deal or avoid such situations. These factors contribute to increased interest of crime fiction novels and TV shows among the people.
According to me, watching or reading about crime affects people’s mental health in many ways. Firstly, it creates a lot of negativity in the minds of people as they perceive all situations in their life negatively, for instance, if a neighbor is very friendly or helpful, they would feel that their neighbor wants something from them or is planning to rob them. Also, it develops unnecessary anxiety and fear among people. Moreover, people get superstitious and narrow minded due to fear of being a crime victim. All of these adversely affect the mental health of people and indirectly may even cause several heart-related or mental problems. However, if people watch or read it to a limit, it would not be that harmful.
To conclude, crime fiction novels and TV shows should be read and watched with limitations. Too much involvement in anything is not advisable. One should prefer reading or watching about things that would make one happy rather than those that create fear and vulnerability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90447761194 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63369871127 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486567164179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5362751304 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286267408466 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104458976383 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108695861322 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207553689332 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117737866809 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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